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1. | Time is not understood the same way in different parts of the world. | |||
2. | American cultures, America has a more materialistic grip over | |||
3. | Non-Americans are connected to the ancient traditions and five minute delay is just the dust. | |||
4. | There is a vast distinction between American people comprehension of time with less educated Middle East. | |||
5. | There are many differences among the cultures and one of them is the idea and comprehension of time. There are different understanding | |||
6. | In the text “The Voice of Time” are | |||
7. | It is a permanent rush. And to non-Americans time is like a museum , a five-minute delay interval is not significant and it is pointless to make appointments too far in advance. | |||
8. | The people understand the time like a museum and it is pointless to make appointments too far in advance. | |||
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1. | One believes that time does not heal and doesn’t value promptness | |||
2. | All schedules, frequent watching in to watch, 24 hours partition makes time material. | |||
3. | One always thinks what will happen tomorrow? | |||
4. | How to get somewhere on time? | |||
5. | Ones plans, ideas, viewpoint. | |||
6. | What is more, to non-Americans an important role plays traditions | |||
7. | There are different understanding. There is different point of view. a ribbon along which one progress That is the main ideas In the text “The Voice of Time” are | |||
8. | It is acceptable that many things happening at the same time | |||
Getting back to | ||||
time is like space it does not heal. | ||||
In conclusion, time has a different and very interesting standpoint in various countries and their cultures and that makes world even more charming. | ||||
Furthermore in American culture At the end I must say that | ||||
Grammar | ||||
1. | Non-Americans are (CONNECTED→RELATED) to the ancient traditions | |||
2. | But Americans believe that time is something that fixed in nature. | |||
3. | There are many differences among the cultures The deepest differences and comprehension of time. All in all, time is important part of one’s life Text “The voices of time” reveal different beliefs | |||
4. | Its vast as a museum and they know, it is pointless to plan something in advance the opposite of the Americans comprehension of time | http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/apostrophe-1.aspx | ||
5. | oriented on future Secondly, time is divided in to different segments While in the Middle East it’s pointless to make some plans to the future | |||
6. | people understand the time like a museum time is handled like a material | http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/like-versus-as.aspx | ||
7. | Non-American | http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/grammar-hyphens.aspx | ||
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