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Good/positive/strong features Clear division of sources and features Bulleted info Things to improve Language in the title constr. and constr. .............The text and the listening More parallelisms Word structures/senetnces ARTICLES Negatives at the front cannot appear A number of people try A small perecnt of people try The number of people tries Parallelisms 1,2.......and n. 1 and 2. Parallelism subjects 1 and 2 are Passive voice – only when you do not know who carried out the action/ or it is of minor importance to you Et cetera- and so on- etc. Et al | Good/positive/strong features Diverse reporting words Paraphrasing is in place Things to improve No adverbial modifiers at the start Reporting words should be used Diversify your reporting words |
For listening Part 5 http://www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/learningenglish/general/talkaboutenglish/2009/04/090427_tae_al.shtml